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Several hundred years ago, humans were nearly exterminated by Titans. Titans are typically several stories tall, seem to have no intelligence, devour human beings and, worst of all, seem to do it for the pleasure rather than as a food source. A small percentage of humanity survived by walling themselves in a city protected by extremely high walls, even taller than the biggest Titans. Flash forward to the present and the city has not seen a Titan in over 100 years. Until that day.....
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Join date : 2014-06-26
Age : 26
Location : Canada

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PostSubject: Luke Kelmann (Updated)   Luke Kelmann (Updated) EmptySun Jun 29, 2014 6:55 pm

Basic Info

Name: Luke Kelmann
Nickname: Watcher
Gender: Male
Age: 19
Sexuality: Straight
Personality: He is quite professional and serious, his intended idea is to get the job done. He has a sense of humor but not quite a big one, his serious attitude and personality is due to his past and it wasn't always that way. When in battle he is ruthless, if all else fails he will do what has to be done in order to succeed, even if it is his life. He hates pointless missions and deaths alike. In order for him to stay sane from the things that goes through his mind he focuses on training along with write music when he is on spare time and either too tired or too injured to train. He will try his hardest to bring some victories under humanity's belt and ensure our survival. Time to take some revenge on Titans, eh? At times he is sad and depressed to a degree, but if something is great enough, he can be cheered up. Not always do you see a smile on his all the time, but it's a great sight when seen. Luke doesn't have many friends anymore except his bestfriend as well. But he rather's to be alone at times, most of the time he keeps to himself, unless he needs to step in and correct someone he is quiet.

Physical Traits

Rank: Rookie
Special title:
Group: Scouting Legion
Job: N/A
Height: 6'2
Weight: 185 Lbs
Hair Color/Length: Brown/To his shoulders
Eye Color: Aqua
Appearance: http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2014/018/e/7/aijima_cecil_render_by_shinkunekita-d72ocuj.png He enjoys wearing a green scarf around his neck or over his face when wearing either his uniform or regular clothing. He frequently wears a thin shirt under his uniform with a hood on it to wear as well. Around his neck is a necklace of sorts with a gem hanging from it. His brown hair has light streaks of even lighter brown throughout Luke's hair. Luke acquired a scar under his lip when he slipped up in training school. On Luke's right hand he has a busted pinkie finger, if you look hard enough you will notice it. Luke always keeps a clean shave and his uniform always straightened out a clean. Luke's regular uniform is a darker shade of brown, making him distinguishable. He always wears his two daggers, Peace and Harmony equipped on his sides. Luke has a more muscular built look to him, although he isn't a huge muscle monster, he's still pretty built for his own good.

Stats

Toughness - 6
Intellect - 5
Dexterity - 7

Character Information

Likes: Music is a passion for Luke and he dearly loves it. He writes music when ever he gets the chance to and plays it when ever he can as well.Cleanliness plays a role in his life as well, Luke's mother used to be a housekeeper for the rich and always gave Luke a hard time when ever he was making a mess. Killing Titans is one of the priorities Luke has on his mind in the present time, he is determined to avenge his family and destroy the Titan race. Dancing was something enjoyed because it was something his mother did that she enjoyed, it was one of the few times he actually saw her happy, eventually Luke picked it up and started doing it as a hobby.

Dislikes: Titans was like a nasty insect of your bedroom window to Luke, disgraceful and distasteful, Luke will never be at peace until the Titans are wiped out, Luke was determined to fight them eventually, when he was ready. He will set out and destroy him with the best he can. Unprofessional People was a problem for Luke due to it risking the chance of getting someone killed, even the slightest misbehavior can alter everything on a mission and compromise you, several people can die and a snowball effect will occur, because of that, Luke avoids type of people like this and tries to get to the point of operations and missions he told to carry out. Sexist people annoys Luke as well, discouraging someone else just because of them being the opposite gender bothered Luke and he won't stand for it, this happens quite often around the military headquarters at times, it annoys him as stated, reason why this is bad is because it pulls the victim away from training and they start to focus on things that don't matter, knowing that he hates all these things, most of the time he can ignore them. But others? He'll watch em' pay.

Fears: Being the center of attention bothered Luke and he was always afraid of being so, although he knew that someday he will overcome it, he wishes for it not to come the reason why this came about is due to him accidentally tripping over and falling in front of the scouting legions march back into the walls, he fell right in front of the commander and his horse, Luke was so afraid and shocked, everyone just stared and then gasped as soon as it happened. Water was always that scared Luke, reason being is because, whenever he learned to swim,
his father threw him in the pond let Luke try to swim by himself, regardless if he'd drown, Luke hated his father for it, but even if it worked, it still scared him. A lot. Dying was another fear of his whenever his parents were killed by the titans, watching their bodies getting crushed by the titans teeth haunts Luke to this day, he didn't go back to save them, or at least try he just ran away with the next wall without hesitation. Most of these fears were acquired when he was younger, although these are within' him, it doesn't stop him Luke.

Motivations: Revenge was always on Lukes mind and he will take it when he seeks it, his parents died to them, and so did his brother, he will get revenge. That always plays through his mind, when he fights that's what keeps the blood pumping, he plays it over and over in his head until he reaches his goal and destroys the Titans. Memories of family pushes him forward, making him try harder to fight the titans as well as to train harder, his last breath will be on top of a titans head with it collapsed under his feet. Memories is the only thing he has from his family, that and a few small things he took from his home. Nightmares sometimes occur, flash backs of his family being slaughtered happens almost every week at least once, and it bothered Luke, but at the same time it kept him on his goal. Hate strengthens Luke and causes him to be reckless somewhat, this is dangerous to a degree, but still okay for him to move on, the feeling of hate brings adrenaline quickly, making him better at certain things by only the slightest bit. Hatred is said to be bad, but for Luke, it helps him in different ways, ways that could be bad at the same time. Nevertheless, all things that motivate people aren't always good.

Character History

Background: Back when he lived in Shiganshina District, before the gate was breached. He lived with his father, his father favored his brother more because he states him to be "The better son" because he went off to become a Survey Corp member, since only Luke was left at home as the son, he would have to do. At this time Luke's mother has recently became sick, she loved Luke and his brother Kai equally. But when it came to his Luke's father... Not so much. Suddenly as Luke was bringing back some sticks and smaller logs for firewood.

The gate was breached and Luke froze as he had a clear view of what happened, even today he doesn't even have a clear memory of that day. Later on after a Military Police soldier caught Luke's arm and pushed him forwards to safety, Titan's ran through the gates hole as Luke ran, throwing away the logs and sticks he was bringing home. Once he finally arrived home to tell his mother and father the news, his father Hei laughed and said that it wasn't possible and urged Luke after yelling at him to go get the stick's again, Luke ignored this order and rushed to his mother and told her the news, she started crying and handed what was left of their money to him and told him to leave and run away. After her looking out the window seeing a Titan from a distance.

Luke then took the money and what things he can, including things to remember his mother, a necklace that had red jewel within the necklace to remember his mother. Upon leaving his father catches his arm and speaks saying, "Where do you think you're going?" at this point he ignored him again, right as he did so his mother spoke up with little energy she could to let Luke go. After running with little time he had left to get to safety, tears ran down his eyes slowly. Looking back, a Aberrant then slam's onto his house, quickly eating his father, while a Military Police officer, runs out with his mother, trying to save her while apparently his father refused to go. The officer was running from a Aberrant that was after them both, before he could use his maneuver gear, it was already too late, they were crushed immediately. After making it to safety just in time, he eventually, after taking some time to think about it, he decided he was going to join the Survey Corps. After going through the training and required skills to join within the trainee camp.

Now, he wears a mask to cover his face, this is due to him feeling as if he shamed his family when he left them behind, he doesn't wear it out of battle but is still ashamed and slightly embarrassed but pushes through most of the time. To this day he is within the Survey Corps after graduating from the Trainee camp and selected them, now known as a rookie due to him recently joining, but he was the top 5 in his class along with his new acquired friend he gained within the class (Will be a new character later on if I get time to do so). Now every so often he gets flash backs of him and his father, and sometimes he'll get a weird feeling at times, but most of the time now he's fine.

Extras: Writes music for the fallen and dead (If a squad mate dies and/or others)


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Join date : 2014-06-18

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PostSubject: Re: Luke Kelmann (Updated)   Luke Kelmann (Updated) EmptyMon Jun 30, 2014 6:53 am

Lets get this started. There aren't many problems, but that doesn't mean it is approved. Anyway here are the few this I see that need improved.

1. You will need to add a third fear seeing as you only have two of the three that are required.

2. Since you are applying for a titan you will need to shoot over and beyond. That said I want your appearance to be over the 100 words required, 200 is ideal.

3. Also your fears and motivation need to be 100 words each since you need to be above average.

4. While your likes are good on this I want you to raise your dislikes to 150 words. Just a few words, shouldn't be hard for you ;P
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Join date : 2014-06-18

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Rank: Rookie
Stats:
*: Civilian

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PostSubject: Re: Luke Kelmann (Updated)   Luke Kelmann (Updated) EmptyMon Jun 30, 2014 7:25 am

Everything looks fine to me now and it looks really nice. You have been approved by Shiro the Smexy :3
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